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XOx Uriah xOX
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0 posted 2006-07-05 01:07 PM



      Nailed to a tree

His essence reduced to words
  The tree reduced to paper

He is still imbedded to the tree

Those who cling to the letters
are unable to grasp his spirit

© Copyright 2006 Larry F. Leake - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2006-07-05 01:12 PM


uncanny account, very very well done

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2 posted 2006-07-06 12:07 PM



this rocks

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3 posted 2006-07-06 03:30 PM


Larry~
I find this to be a brilliant piece of poetic thinking~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*

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4 posted 2006-07-06 09:31 PM


Wow, powerfully consise...I echo Marge - this is brilliant.

Melissa~

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