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The Blank Canvas
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The Blank Canvas |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Blank Canvas We face blank canvas every day The palette half of misty dream Our mind the brush of interplay The lubricant an oil of seem We paint the day’s reality The cold and hard of how we feel With love and pains finality And dream the night with mighty zeal We mix the two to see the truth A painting that will show the core A painting with the cost of youth A peek into the evermore We put a spy glass to our eye To magnify horizons deep To see the ghost of spirits fly To see the phantom of our keep But low each picture of our day Is but a fraction of our way |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
We paint the day’s reality The cold and hard of how we feel With love and pains finality And dream the night with mighty zeal we, are our own artists... Morning Sy, exceptional writing this morn... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Yes we are our own artists, thank you dear. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I have always admired this rhyme scheme and you've done it so well good to read you this afternoon Sy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Good to have you read me.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Good afternoon Sy! Loved today's offering from you.  I hope you are well and enjoying a fine summer.  & Nancy.Don't bring me down now, |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
::smiles:: Excellent ! The first thing painted upon the blank canvas is "me". The rest follows. LOL I am a great freestyle artist...but "me" likes to paint by numbers. ::smiles:: Great write ! :: bows :: |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Thank you sweety everything is fine. Uriah, Thank you my friend, enjoyed your reply. LOL |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
blue or grey? what color do i paint the sky each day??? is it my choice alas, or already predetermined? |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Well, Dear Seymour, something is wrong with my paintbrush. I try so hard to paint a better picture, but my paintbrush seems to have a mind of it's own. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inkedgoddess What ever your heart desires, it is your paint brush and palette. SmartChick Sometimes we seem to be lost, but then again it is your palette and paint brush. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ You not only do a masterpiece on canvas, you manage to do remarkable word-art~ *HUGLETS*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, Sy...you bring back the memory of the palette poem... and for you, I shall bring it back again...for YOU were the one who inspired it!  |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Sy, To paint in color thoughtful sky, take time to muse and wonder why such beauty blooms in tender face, and love holds eternal place within the heart no matter how our eyes might view the here and now... though length of days may wane and measure, you've found your life in heaven's treasure! thank you for sharing your palette ~ It's lovely! Klassy |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
How right you are, Sy. Much enjoyed this! ...jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge I love butterflies and you are one of them. Sunshine I have so many butterflies and you are a favorite. Klassy Lassy My thoughts like the wind disappear But I know in your heart they are there iliana. Thank you for the flower. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
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