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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2006-07-05 09:26 AM

Disdain
courses through veins
weakening me

bringing self
to my knees
leaving barely enough
strength to survive

I am
still alive

kicking and screaming

but you can't hear
because you hide
cloaked in fear

afraid to face
reality,
you chose
not to see

what is left of me

in the aftermath
of your stupidity

for every action
a reaction

sometimes fashioned
in fists that fall
slamming them hard
against the wall

over and over
while emotions bleed
and fulfill
my basic need.....

unrestrained
insanity...

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love. Axel Ekenstierna

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2006-07-05 10:08 AM

seems like guilt sometimes speaks volumns, doesn't it....during a real crisis, we come to know our true friends...

this was heartbreakingly good poetry...

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2006-07-05 10:08 AM

An emotional write that is well written.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2006-07-05 12:05 PM

afraid to face
reality,
you chose
not to see

what is left of me

in the aftermath
of your stupidity

I understand this well

Lighthousebob
Member Elite

since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

4 posted 2006-07-05 12:46 PM

You've really gripped my emotions here.

-Bob

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2006-07-05 07:24 PM

Nice writing...James

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

6 posted 2006-07-06 12:37 PM

"over and over
while emotions bleed
and fulfill
my basic need.....

unrestrained
insanity..."

What an excellent write!!
Love the close.

JL

Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed:
blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed.
~Jesus Christ

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2006-07-06 01:54 PM

I'm glad to see this one...

you did good!

jody5
Senior Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 876
California, U.S.A.

8 posted 2006-07-06 02:04 PM

I liked this write, I can relate to the emotions.

Hugs Kimberly

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2006-07-06 03:18 PM

GentleOne~

When pounding fists against the wall don't help ... you find the quill to release it to the page~

That is a good, good thing, I think~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - [email protected]

luminosity
Senior Member

since 2005-11-18

Posts 813

10 posted 2006-07-07 05:34 PM

I agree with Marge...writing can pound out even more than fists...though both do have their season...
hugs and sighs

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

11 posted 2006-07-07 09:05 PM

hugging you
cuz the words just flew
out the door

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