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Broken Minds |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
He sits on the street corner lost in the colours of his mind dirty and unkempt somebody's son. Too many bad days too many bad memories they finally took his mind and broke it on their wheel. Who's to say what sanity is who's to say what's right he lives in a world of fantasy he lives not in this world. He doesn't ask that you help him he only wants what he can see there in the kaleidoscope of his dream broken colours broken minds. Fragments ever changing fragmented thoughts fragmented life broken colours broken minds. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Powerful writing, Paula.....I've always thought this about homeless people - though, of course, you express it much more poignantly.....It's a shame that this is a fact of life, people should realize not to judge, but rather understand. I'm saving this  Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sad situation good write |
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Will Rhyme Member
since 2006-05-22
Posts 149 |
Nice, very nice writing Paula. Will |
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