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Ada'Do'Lis'Do'Ti
Junior Member

since 2006-07-04

Posts 24
germany

0 posted 2006-07-04 09:17 PM

Dear Hannah,

     Sorry we never got to met
Your name is one I'll never forget
Your probably sixteen or a little older
Some how I know the worlds colder
I really wish i could've been there
Crying right now about time we won't share
Kinda strange lookin back how things go
Talk about it more but you already know
Found out about you 3 monthes after I leaft
Heard the words, they stole away my breath
You are a blessing sent from god above
Know me and your mom were madly in love
Hate It that i won't be there and watch you grow
but the world's hard sometimes you know
Got sent off to do a job far away
Never thought I wouldn't be there today
I fought the good fight a few times before
Always made it through god knows I hate war
But someone had to be here to keep us free
Wouldn't want anyone else to die for me
So I did the best I could each day
Tried to help out in my own way
I hope I died well so you can stand proud
Don't be afraid to get a little loud
and stand for what you believe
Theres alot of guys and gals like me
that gave everything so America can stay free
Just wanna say I love you my beautiful girl
Want you to know my family was my only world
Guess I'll close now don't know what else to say
Exept I love you and thought of y'all everday
I love very much tell your mom too
I'll love you both forever and true
Until in the end
When we're reunited again
       goodbye my beautiful girl and God
       bless and keep you

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2006-07-04 10:04 PM

oh, a heartache in blue
may love be enough

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2006-07-07 04:55 AM

Nice flow of thoughts...James

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2006-07-07 07:03 AM

Welcome to Passions,
and thank you for your first post!

Please, check your email
for a Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2006-07-07 08:10 AM

Albert~
Welcome the the PiP circle of poetic friendships~

across the water to you~

Enjoyed the poignancy of your penning~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2006-07-07 11:01 AM

Welcome to Passions!
Much enjoyed your first post.
I look forward to reading more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

Serena
Junior Member

since 2006-06-25

Posts 47

6 posted 2006-07-07 04:00 PM

In the end the hardest thing to deal with in the separation and devision of war, is having to part with your family. Dispite what good it may, or may not do... Having to leave them behind to do it, is heartbreaking. This poem shows and expresses that very well, thanks for the read.

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