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Three-Hundred-Sixty-Degrees |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Three-Hundred-Sixty-Degrees Taking time to linger Preview, to view, to shutter snap Panoramic considerations and compassionate stare Just how much I really care is clear Dew impairs the heats renew Cooling emotional seas, let calm The might by which I stand beside you passions on Building a three dimensional boat Mountains moved as I came farther Diminished in the colors of Quaking Aspen Autumn drenched the highlights of my eyes Causing me to pause where I feel most at home And still, the night is not blackness July finds myriad color scheme through wax Moving longer stretching molecules of somber facts But joy smoothed edges sound Taking turns, I spin around Watching you grow and change in the distance Sun soaked, moonlit and parched I reach Bursting with desire, spoken fire, love’s beseech Summer simmers a horizon made for us Carried hand by heart, within a lifelong trust Moved I am, looking in your eyes, the way you see What a view, the river of your dreams imparts to me Copyright Kkh 7/4/06 |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Beautifully said. :-) Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things, |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Summer simmers a horizon made for us Carried hand by heart, within a lifelong trust Moved I am, looking in your eyes, the way you see What a view, the river of your dreams imparts to me" Beautiful, for sure! JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Summer simmers a horizon made for us Carried hand by heart, within a lifelong trust Moved I am, looking in your eyes, the way you see What a view, the river of your dreams imparts to me I especially like these lines. I could have highlighted the entire poem...but, that would be selfish of me, taking the whole dang thing off of the page and keeping it locked away... Well done Kiddo, very well done! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
lovely write TD |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
julys are meant to be savored as such. the glory of the green coming full circle in panoramic view from you |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Summer simmers a horizon made for us Carried hand by heart, within a lifelong trust Moved I am, looking in your eyes, the way you see What a view, the river of your dreams imparts to me this is so beautiful Kathleen..I remember those views and hope to see them again someday... M |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
WOW! This is so beautiful; and I love the imagery!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Mountains moved as I came farther Diminished in the colors of Quaking Aspen Autumn drenched the highlights of my eyes Causing me to pause where I feel most at home woven images set to paper in high quality rhythm and rhyme...enjoyed |
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