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WindWalker
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0 posted 2006-06-30 09:20 PM


To welcome me today:
a cold, empty, gray shore
and even colder waves
crawling hungrily over the sand...

A smog-filtered sun rising
hesitantly above denuded trees
casting uncertain light
through dissipating shadows of night.

Tears fill my eyes.  
Why?
Why must I think of those thousands
condemned to death today
because so few understand
the rhythm of life;
so few accept the call of compassion
that would change everything?
That could even stop death?
That would stop the spread of war?

And I really wonder:
Do we need military forces and weaponry
To protect our way of life?  
By what law do we deny others
the right to their own way of life?
How great can such a law be,
when children die of hunger
and the homeless fall in the streets?

What if we took all that we spend
defending or protecting ourselves
to alleviate poverty; to feed the hungry:
whom would we have to fear then?
Ah, but so impossible, isn’t it.

I feel a fathomless sorrow
for wasted lives and pointless deaths
as greed spreads hungrily over this world,
dragging death in its wake:
if we refuse to see, who then
shall teach us of empathy and compassion?

© Copyright 2006 Sharran WindWalker - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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1 posted 2006-06-30 10:42 PM


who then, indeed
when greed swallows compassion's heart

thank you, for this write

WindWalker
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2 posted 2006-07-03 12:57 PM


Thank you Midnitesun for your comment!!!!!!
ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2006-07-03 08:15 PM


..."I feel a fathomless sorrow
for wasted lives and pointless deaths
as greed spreads hungrily over this world,
dragging death in its wake:
if we refuse to see, who then
shall teach us of empathy and compassion?"

Powerfully written.
When greed spreads hungrily, and the hungry starve, yet we stand content in the shadows...the treachery of freedom.

The Lady
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4 posted 2006-07-03 11:14 PM




"By what law do we deny others
the right to their own way of life?
How great can such a law be,
when children die of hunger
and the homeless fall in the streets?"

Yes, WindWalker, and who decides who our enemies are?

Wonderfully written.


WindWalker
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5 posted 2006-07-05 10:26 AM


Thank you ThisDiamond and The Lady for your coments!!!!!!!!!!!

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2006-07-05 07:22 PM


Nice writing...this is why the Presidential elections are so important...but are we really getting leaders now...or just politicians...James
WindWalker
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7 posted 2006-07-07 10:14 AM


Thank you JamesMichael for your comment.
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