Open Poetry #38 |
Rainbow Edged |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Rainbow Edged I live in still of clouded thoughts arranged in my design to suit my moods of comfortless to caress these words of mine. The power of a penny's thoughts contentment can receive when finding humor in each day to form this summer's weave... Of pleasures held-together-thoughts each thread a seamed blue sky, rippled with a rainbow's edge dimpled with imply. The layers rise in clouded thoughts, the pain all worth the haunt, when always in the back of mind are captured memories' taunt. A whisper here, a whisper there a week away to be, the treasures that have touched my heart will come along with me. A melody when eyes are closed all dressed in colors pure, rainbowed thoughts to share the night: long distance dreams... secure. M (*going on a short vacation*) "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
M, How I delight in your upbeat spirit and acknowledgement of the pain. Enjoy the trip as much as I enjoyed the read. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Larry.I am about to leave..and hopefully the rain has stopped for a few days in this part of the country. have a great 4th M |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"A whisper here, a whisper there a week away to be, the treasures that have touched my heart will come along with me." And have a JOLLY GOOD time... Pip-Pip... I wish I was on Holiday! heeheee... JL Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
I hope you have a great vacation! |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Have a great time.....loved your poem! sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Happy vacation, Maureen! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you came back rested but itchy as usual..if it isn't sun poisoning like last year it's those darn gnats biting me to death. There must be a secret to not getting bit besides using deet which didn't seem to work. M |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
enjoyed the lullaby of words sounds like youre in a vacation kind of mood already |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Do enjoy the reverie...and OFF SKINTASTIC works very well (even in Michigan woods!) Loved the melodic tone of this write. TD |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thanks Michele ..yes I would like to stay in that mood TD, a little late but I will go and get some today..I have a feeling it's going to be a buggy summer. M |
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