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ManOfWolves28
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0 posted 2006-06-29 02:16 PM



Note: This is made up as I go-

The sun is shining quite bright today.
How come its so light so early?
The sun feels warmer today.
How come this is?
My Lil Bear hasn't come home yet
but he will soon I hope.
His sister has been a bummed out kitty cat.
Theres a strange silence in the air.
Wonder if this sudden change is good or not.
Im thinkin it's all suspicious and
things are happening that usually dont.
Has there been a change coming and I
was never told?
Whatever it is I hope it goes back
to its default being.

Call me Crowbar the big rig drivin mad man.....

© Copyright 2006 J. A. Griswold - All Rights Reserved
froggy
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since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893
Michigan
1 posted 2006-06-29 03:48 PM


James,
This pretty good for being made up as you went along.
Enjoyed the read.

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

ManOfWolves28
Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 83

2 posted 2006-07-06 02:42 PM


I find it almost no surprise that I have just one comment. I thought people would find something better since it was made up as I went along. Guess my theories are correct on society. -dislikes being a philosapher in psychology sometimes-

Call me Crowbar the big rig drivin mad man.....

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