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Open Poetry #38

[death comes]

shirtless
Member

since 2006-04-29

Posts 359

0 posted 2006-06-29 01:06 PM

death

comes

like a key
in the shape
of a kiss

her tongue
is as sweet
as any woman’s

her breath
is a godless prayer

she undoes
the buttons
of my flesh
till I
am the sigh
of tired wind
passing
through her hair

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Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2006-06-29 01:51 PM

I find myself holding my breath as I read you..
Your pennings are a sigh waiting to be.
Beautiful, articulate..
Love how you say things.
Hugs~Nancy

Don't bring me down now,
let me stay here for awhile
You know life's too short,
let me bathe here in your smile.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2006-06-29 02:20 PM

(sigh)

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

3 posted 2006-06-29 05:54 PM

Another fine read my friend.
Always enjoy reading your words.

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

4 posted 2006-07-01 08:50 PM

Wow...another powerful & evocative piece.....It's good to read you again - you truly are one of pip's finest poets

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

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