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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2006-06-29 08:06 AM

I stand behind your mind
with my arms around your caution
holding your breath for you
lest a whisper escape
and the man of me
finds the woman of you

we both watch eyes
when talking to strangers
and realize we both are
so we close our eyes
so the other can't look down
the low cut of our vulnarable

but we lift our skins
and expose the souls under
we hear our mouths say damn
and watch our hands say please
before they touch sinful
with fingertips hurrying

to be caught holding hands

_______________

daark

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2006-06-29 08:12 AM

the mind is an extremely powerful entity willing us to physically visit wonderful places

wonderful morning read DS thank you

Good Morning

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2006-06-29 08:13 AM

Aaaahhhhh, my favorite of yours, one to keep!

Love,
Margherita

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2006-06-29 08:50 AM

and realize we both are

~*~

A good one to cup
into the palm of
one's hand...

thank you for this, DS...
it is a soft reminder
of what is needed
by all.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2006-06-29 09:19 AM

I love this D.

*sighs*

Klassy Lassy
Member Elite

since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

5 posted 2006-06-29 10:58 AM

lovely heartspeak

where fingertips touch through morning windows

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2006-06-29 11:04 AM

Dark~

I adore the imagery of the all of it~

But, this ... this 'poetogenic' ...
why, why, why didn't "I" think of that ?

Love it ...
(and it isn't even Friday)

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - [email protected]

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

7 posted 2006-06-30 01:29 AM

"holding your breath for you"

This one grabbed at my breath Stranger. So powerful.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2006-06-30 06:55 AM

ladies of pip, thanks to each of you
for blessing my humble words

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