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Summer Ought Six
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Summer Ought Six |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Summer Ought Six Seasonally superb for this western sun burning right ear while facing southerly as rain drops, pelting this window with bows… steam rises from concrete streets while thundering booms grovel and unravel a storm’s blessing on dry parch. ~*~ Pen ~ Ink ~ Moisture to Paper a Poem ~*~ There were three wee bodies of papered-skin wing and furry form stretched along the parkway this morning; I love them for their hunting of irritant buzzers, and wondered at this sight; worried of rabid bodies; hurt for them, seemingly small babies; but likely adult… where are their babies? I am as helpless for them as I am with the rest of the world. ~*~ Death came to my door today. Yet, I pray. " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love ~*~ KRJ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Goodness, not only are you extremely creative at the moment, but you are also extremely sensitive at the moment as well... and your mind sees so many things right now... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 ..'cause I think you need one. |
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FiercestCalm Junior Member
since 2006-06-24
Posts 31michigan |
i loved the way this carried me from place to place, words flowing in the way that life does. and such a powerful ending! beautiful |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Life goes on. After it ends, I mean...on and on forever. What we call death is merely a change....from water to land, if you will, or perhaps it's closer to say the change from land to the freedom of air. Birds had to be lightened in order to fly, their bodies, scales, even their bones changed from the heaviness of lizards...lighter, quicker, more energetic...and so must we, in order to step over the edge of things and fly into what is beyond. So, with some sadness for us and for those we're parted from for a while, we leave our heaviness behind....and rise. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Death came to my door today. Yet, I pray." A perfect ending! Understanding is in the heart of the living though life can seem harsh Love is in the heart of the one praying when the living appears lost. JL  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This is a heart breaker, SIL, very artistically styled. I liked the raindrops that pattered into bows...that line...wow. Also, shows that big heart of yours. Don't we all wish the world to be right........*hugs*....jo |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
This is very powerful, Sunshine.....and I loved the ending line!! Great work here. sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Kari, this is way beyond beauty... your a wonder.... |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Wow...K. I read this several times and found something I missed each time. Don't be surprised if I go back for a few more readings. You are impressive...girlfriend. But you knew that. Patricia |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Beautiful Karilea! |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Such descriptive writing and the subject matter touches the heart with sympathetic softness, thank you K...enjoyed reading..but i always enjoy your poems..thats because you are so good... Goldenrose. |
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