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Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

0 posted 2006-06-28 06:28 PM

ghost

I don’t do
this

well

living takes a
verve
but this

still
once just
once and

in

the
dark I thought

I
had

hands

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2006-06-28 09:54 PM

Dang.

I loved that movie.

You caught this...that...

maybe you didn't want to
but you did....

and since I love watching Swayze...

you knew...[you must have!]
known I would be drawn
to this!

Klassy Lassy
Member Elite

since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

2 posted 2006-06-29 01:52 AM

Amazing feeling in this one, quite appropriate for hands...I can imagine this so vividly in my mind. Enjoyed, too.

Klassy

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2006-06-29 01:55 AM

nicely done

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

4 posted 2006-06-29 03:10 PM

I don't know what movie this relates to. I don't understand the poem. But I love it - just as one doesn't need to understand any of a particular language, nor a particular piece of music, nor the warblings of a bird, but one can love listening to all of these things. This poem has an Emily Dickinson / William Carlos Williams / ee cummings but most especially Ratleader feel to it.

- Owl

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2006-06-29 03:59 PM

The yearn of this is so vibrant, so poignant... it goes straight to the heart... and then straight to the mind as it makes one wonder and ponder. Excellent work!!

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

6 posted 2006-06-29 05:21 PM

deep and thoughtful and also capturing the mood well too..thank you Ed..

Goldenrose.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

7 posted 2006-07-12 08:41 PM

Thank you, my friends....for that truly is what you are.

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______________Ratleader______________

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2006-07-14 11:30 AM

ED

"in

the
dark I thought

I
had

hands"

So deep from within....with an ache to it. Amazing really how the format fits the feel.

divine chaos
Senior Member

since 2006-07-09

Posts 617
dancing 'neath the moon

9 posted 2006-07-14 11:56 AM

ooo how did I miss this one?
I love it

~Sheli~

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