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My Day |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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My Day Each day I write another line Each day on which my senses dine And take this silver thread to weave To make and sail what I believe It is a sail of seek and find Of rubbing rough and sweet and kind Of fantasy and fallacy Of heresy and lunacy An argosy of endless moor Of paths to find the entrance door Of glossaries theosophy Of wave on waves philosophy An endless circle seems my wed Except when I’m asleep in bed And there I dip wells fantasy And drink my cup of ecstasy Although a time of non exist It seems to prime a circles twist |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Each day on which my senses dine And take this silver thread to weave To make and sail what I believe compass of who you are on life's golden path... wonderfully written and felt... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A wonderful morning read Sy! Hope your day is a peaceful and relaxing one.  &  , NancyDon't bring me down now, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Your days are much better than mine...may I borrow one or two?  M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and I am glad for each day like this  |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
..and if you never wrote a word to ink your soul's design to think you mute is too absurd ~ heart's art would pantomime! love you for sharing your day! Klassy |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You do know how to rhyme and make it a story or a piece of wisdom...Not one of us can do it as well as yourself. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
An endless circle seems my wed Except when I’m asleep in bed And there I dip wells fantasy And drink my cup of ecstasy Although a time of non exist It seems to prime a circles twist Dear Seymour, POETRY is your way of life. Oh, in the stillness of the night your subconscious mind becomes the playground for your creativity ... and your pen knows how to connect to the source! Wonderful! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ You are a wonder. Good morning sweet. Nancy, Thanks for the wonderful. Maureen, Just reach in the bag and pull one out. passing, You are a dear. Klassy Lassy I thank you sweet thing. Barry, You are kind my friend. Margherita You always send a delightful reply. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I just love to read your rhymes, Seymour. Actually, I love to read all that you write. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SmartChick  |
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Poetic Concept Member
since 2006-06-25
Posts 66God's Fingerprint |
I like this not as cliche as I thought it was going to turn out but definitely had a tint of it but I felt a some truth in there and emotion always help so good job keep writing...elevation is the key Return the favor on Valentines "How vain it is to sit down and write when u have not stood up to live" Anonymous (Unknown) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Poetic Concept I thank you for the read and good comment. |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Haha, brilliant! The twist is what it makes it all worth while it seems. nice write, Kristabell |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kristabell Thank you for the read and comment. |
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