»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #38
»
opus of a rainbow
| Open Poetry #38 |
|
opus of a rainbow |
|
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
|
Rain-bowed sounds surround searching souls, filling the sky with parallel bands of harmony, dressed up in nature’s magnificent finery, red, orange, and yellow cascading alongside green, indigo, blue violet, as a bending light beam screams past my eyes, encircles itself inside opens corridors of my ears, that I may hear the pure unadulterated sounds of love’s light reflecting, refracting, enveloping me within the sounds of glorious color harmony. Rain-bowed sounds fill the awakening sky, layering parallel bands of harmony, like splayed fingertips of humanity revealing that Life is a Maestro’s primary orchestrated song, played out in the keys of a One reality. Life itself, is the prime opus, a celebration of unity in diversity, and the rainbow is the main refrain. |
||
| © Copyright 2006 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
What fantastic colour you have splashed onto the written page here Kacy, loved the opening aliteration too..thank you for this...a poem of colourful harmony.. Goldenrose. ''As the deer pants for steams of water, so my soul pants for you O God'' |
||
|
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
and thank you Phil, for reading, and hearing the rainbow as well as seeing it |
||
|
Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Wow, Kacy, you have outdone yourself with this kaleidoscopic light filled poem! Aaahhhhh .... Love, Margherita  |
||
|
Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Midnight You write like an honest devil at speed in the chorus of your words Dave |
||
|
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Margherita, glad that you enjoyed this tune. Dave? glad you listened and saw the rainbow, though I'm still thinking about that reply.  |
||
|
Rainbowdust Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320Sydney, Australia |
Absolutely gorgeous, Kacy! I obviously have a soft spot for rainbows and this is one of the best rainbow poems I have ever read. Am keeping this one. The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears. |
||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
another awesome write Kacy |
||
|
LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Rain-bowed sounds fill the awakening sky, layering parallel bands of harmony, like splayed fingertips of humanity revealing that Life is a Maestro’s primary orchestrated song, played out in the keys of a One reality. Life itself, is the prime opus, a celebration of unity in diversity, and the rainbow is the main refrain. Ohhhhh Kacy, how beautiful, perfect...wonderful story, your in rare form and this I believe, is one of my favorites of yours.... Life itself...Is a Prime Opus and so is reading you! |
||
|
Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
LOVE this! So inspiring! Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
||
|
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Shireen, thanks! what an honor Dixie, thank gal, hugs for that. Lee, oh, from one of the best I get this reply Melissa, I really appreciate that reply. I'm glad you are posting regularly again! |
||
|
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
If you lived to the north, I would have said it might have been the northern lights.... But a rainbow will do quite fine with me. |
||
|
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Magnus, did you ever read my rainbow dancing lights write? Thanks for spending time in the rainbow. |
||
Allysa 
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
I like the *colorful* imagery.And, the alliteration of the opening line. <3 |
||
|
picturegramic Member
since 2006-05-16
Posts 112 |
What beautiful colorful words you splash! Thanks for sharing this one. picturegramic :) |
||
|
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Alyssa, thanks! alliterations are fun. thank you, picturegramic! |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
