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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Continental Light I watched the clock tick into some tomorrow when only hours ago I read of some poet that had made his history writing some thing, supposedly, better than the rest of you. It was almost as good as yours. Free verse then Pulitzer, and an honor prizes those I do not know. I know you. I know the worthy. You, who follow a light’s line and mark step cross stand way across boundaries others will never know. Polite, those who court me when I appreciate their hope; albeit perhaps false be I know these, their challenges when they say…. you’ve done better than this! Any poet who believes they are….well, s/he lives in you, my our their reader. Let me be yours, my, our continental poet. © Karilea Rilling Jungel June 26, 2006 |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
searching for the right words can't find them tonight perhaps the 104F temps today just drained my brain of anything of substance  but want you to know, I read and felt this |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 much enjoyed |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
 to my SIL!.....jo |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
certainly a poem to ponder over, when so much is based on not what you know, but who you know, or who knows you. a poet who cares |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very interesting! |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
This one will stay with me, and in my moments of quiet, I will meditate on this writing. I think of the primary reason I write when I can find the time to do so...and that reason is that I NEED to write for me. Patricia |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie....Let me be yours!!  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I am yours....hehe loved this and your mind.... Hold tight to that independance Lady your a winner!!!!! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Wow!  jl  Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: blessed are they that have not seen, and yet have believed. ~Jesus Christ |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I loved all the corners in this wandering through an excellent and very alive mind. I have saved it in my Sunshine folder, firstly because I want it, and secondly to ponder the last 3 stanzas offline, when I can do so at my leisure. - Owl |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
please....be our poet!! but then, you already are!  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
was like a birthday present presented on my day... A beautiful truthful expression of poetry M |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I am here pondering your poetic considerations. Probably in poetry, even though we might express our innermost emotions, everything has already been said, in one way or another, but whenever we succeed in "charging our creations" with our personal essence, then they are truly original and worthy. And when we follow our inner voice and transmit something to the reader, when there is communication then we fulfill ourselves. Thank you, dear Karilea Sunshine, for sharing your beauty with us. Love, Margherita |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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