Open Poetry #38 |
Soon the Day will Love |
Martie
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Posts 28049California |
Soon the Day will Love The dry skin of day warm like marbles left in sun bursting silent all their color to roll their pleasures turn How to trip so far come far the lasting kiss cannot resist how lately singing brings it this bliss of pounding tide Even the cool mist can tell the edge is softly down so up and all the patter of the wings make chorus of the wind and things So soon the tide will tell the distance and on the other side of waiting the day will love and all |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The day will love ... Such a deeply beautiful poetic intuition, dear Martie! Love it! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You are so amazing...I will never write as you do...I don't think it is even possible. Please continue! Never stop! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Love this one, Martie!!! Love it! ....jo |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Even the cool mist can tell the edge is softly down so up and all the patter of the wings make chorus of the wind and things So soon the tide will tell the distance and on the other side of waiting the day will love and all" Yes, the day will love and all. Beautiful Martie. Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Serena Junior Member
since 2006-06-25
Posts 47 |
Soon the day will Love... a beautiful poem, a beautiful title. Just beautiful. |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, very beautiful, Martie! Lovely expression! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"and on the other side of waiting the day will love and all" Beautiful poem, Martie, and I just love the "and all" - how much that encompasses if the truth be known. I'll be in Seattle this weekend for a whole three weeks with my son - exciting stuff! Got your number, Martie dear! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome!! |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
If anything your poem reminds me of a current situation, and an on line connection that is so new. The question being, will it last and grow, or again was this just a tidal occasion. a poet who cares |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Enjoy enjoy enjoy! and give them my best! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh Marty, this is just beautiful. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Well, look what I found -- a Martie poem to start my day! This one has such a strange break to it, of surety within some discord....it is like the broken chorus inside a Chopin concerto, that takes us away from the melodic beginning and makes us ready for some inevitable harmony at the end. There's much that is written within this poem, just behind the words....I can feel it throbbing in there. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was a glorious read, the Title alone, captured me...but this Even the cool mist can tell the edge is softly down so up and all the patter of the wings make chorus of the wind and things Martie, this was enchanting...quit remarkable you are loved this |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Thank you, poet friends...I'm off to my son's wedding now....I'll bring more poetry back with me on the 4th. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
how beautiful Martie....such a serene feeling to this... And so it those we live with |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
You and Taylor have a great time at the wedding - am enjoying your wonderful poetry - Paul |
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