Open Poetry #38 |
flesh, feelings & life |
LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
flesh, feelings & life a nearby laugh, floats through my thoughts full lips, rummaging vibrant discussions like an oversized purse, moving towards flawless illusions drawing memoirs, gestures of questioning gaze touching my hand, with a sound of sunlight scenting the air, confirming selective, warm pine scents re-creating life’s vibrant colors there … i press my nose against winter’s darkness looking through the long pause of a roller coaster ride another soul hums through a penny bright moon, illuminating the life i live in… beckoning me, to hold a paintbrush with luminous eyes of jade green hugging courage, when i live inside that laughter, & a nearby parable i tremble for life itself… taking a peek at the deep sea of uncertainty which becomes my favorite book in the library of strange horizons where the first step might be the hardest but undersea cities really rock and yes, there is a God! [This message has been edited by LeeJ (05-23-2006 02:46 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"i tremble for life itself… taking a peek at the deep sea of uncertainty which becomes my favorite book in the library of strange horizons where the first step might be the hardest but undersea cities really rock and yes, there is a God!" YES!!!!!! Once again you have rendered me speechless!! Now THIS one has to be my favourite from you!! Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Wow, that last stanza is excellent! If we could see the unknown as an adventure instead of something to be afraid of, then we will be able to enjoy life much more. Ben “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ A little dizzy from the busy but always enjoy your writes. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Here is the Lee J magic..the wonder and word choice unique..enjoyed..thank you.. Goldenrose. ''As the deer pants for steams of water, so my soul pants for you O God'' |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: YOU rock! This is truly a fantastic write. I'll keep it. Love, Margherita |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Awesome Lee... stay on the glide path, you are flying now! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can only say this is outstanding |
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picturegramic Member
since 2006-05-16
Posts 112 |
The last stanza was my favorite and a powerful way to end. thanks for sharing. picturegramic :) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
what rocks is your mind and I will be back tomorrow for another read rock by rock, line by line |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
LeeJ you made me smile and I really needed that! Thank You! :-) |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
I always enjoy taking a peek with you Hope |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
I really like the last stanza but also this "i press my nose against winter’s darkness looking through the long pause of a roller coaster ride" very nice |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Each stanza a joyful mixture of your thoughts. Good sharing your delightful cerebral wanderings. best to you, martyjo |
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