Open Poetry #38 |
RECIPES FOR? |
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since 2006-04-29
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RECIPES FOR? take a forest or a stick perhaps a raindrop or the ocean maybe a galaxy or a firefly possibly a grain of sand or a desert perchance a library or a word even a petal or a garden haply the universe or a neutron still there’s the ovum or the corpse NOW, add man PLEASE VISIT MY REGULARLY UPDATED WEB SITE http://www.anthonyarmstrong.zoomshare.com |
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Poetic Concept Member
since 2006-06-25
Posts 66God's Fingerprint |
Yeah thats interesting enough, I think that man doesnt really compare to most or those things, nor do they have a likeness to anything great...I think it is cool and collective, this I believe will be a poem memorable one, one that just sticks I guess Return the favor on Swear to God "How vain it is to sit down and write when u have not stood up to live" |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Your words weave a vision that is stunning in all ways and then add ingredient of man to see what he will do with the recipe you gave him....will he let his senses be delighted with the beauty of it or will his ego guide him to take perfection believing he can make it better and in truth destroy it...Amazing the direction your words make my thoughts go...This poem is both powerful and thought provoking...I must say I love it...*big hugs* |
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