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Serena Junior Member
since 2006-06-25
Posts 47 |
A battle with myself Against myself In myself. My own worst enemy - A mirror image. Distorted mind ravings. The cost of my desire The flames I use To consume me - higher. Staring into the abyss - Staring back through I nside my soul. Fawned face so innocent Just a wolf under control. The demon inside me Grabs a-hold.. |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Oh, this is beautiful. Plus, the wolf is my favorite animal; always a bonus. Welcome to piptalk. I'm gonna enjoy reading you, I'm certain...  "Is any song worth singing if it doesn't help?" -- Wilco, 'Wishful Thinking' |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I was once told that my mind was my own worst enemy.... I think this poem says much the same thing. Welcome to Passions! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Serena It is good to look into the depth far enough to see the other side...enjoyed this! Welcome to Passions! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Welcome to PIP! The secret lies in the acceptance of our duality. Nice first entry! Love, Margherita |
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Poetic Concept Member
since 2006-06-25
Posts 66God's Fingerprint |
I think this is good, not as expressionistic as I thought after the first stanza but defintely a good read...the wolf? I still dont understand why..the wolf? but regardless this was still nice...Good job...elevation is the key. Return the Favor on Swear to God "How vain it is to sit down and write when u have not stood up to live" |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Serena, Welcome to Passions! A wonderful first post. Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to Passions! You give heart in your rendering here...well done. TD |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
WOW! loved this one welcome to poetry in blue I look forward to more from your free muse |
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Serena Junior Member
since 2006-06-25
Posts 47 |
Thank you all, and it's good to find a community like this one! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Fawned face so innocent Just a wolf under control" Powerful work Serena. Welcome! I have enjoyed your first post. More please. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions! A wonderful entrance piece you have chosen. I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
Fresh dark poets don't forget its over there you would be most welcome darkness always wins you know that don't you i post in both but always dark. Welcome from Walter I went to the desert on a horse with no name, it felt good to get out of the rain. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serena~ Welcome to PiP~ Intriguing ... and I can certainly understand why you would choose the wolf to express yourself so creatively~ Enjoy your stay ... there are many fine and talented poets here~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
A wonderful first post. Welcome to Passions, I hope you enjoy your time here. |
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GTP Junior Member
since 2006-06-18
Posts 35NC...USA |
welcome!...you have made a good first impression!... |
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Serena Junior Member
since 2006-06-25
Posts 47 |
Thank you all! I can only hope the rest of my posts are as fruitful. I can't wait to see the reactions either way... And I can't wait to read more of the poetry I am finding here already  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
welcome to Passions I enjoyed this first poem will be looking for more |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
enjoyed this and you for uncovering both sides of our human selfs... |
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Zara14 Junior Member
since 2006-06-27
Posts 11Northen Ireland |
thats is a brill poem |
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nedj Member
since 2006-06-23
Posts 87Oregon USA |
Nice exploration of the underside of the tapestry. I particularly liked the image of a "wolf under control." :-) Encore! A poem's just a poet in a word. |
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