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SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2006-06-25 03:05 PM

I've live alone way too long
Don't try to tie me down, now
That would be oh so wrong

There has been no one, here
I even had to answer to
I come and got when I want
And, do whatever I want to do

If you can accept me for being
The person I have become, then
Maybe you and I can hook up
But, whatever you do, don't fence me in

That would be your biggest mistake
I'll come and go, whenever I want to
But,if you are extra special nice to me
I'll be spending most of my time with you

6-25-06

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2006-06-25 03:11 PM

Dear Sue, you are right to make him understand that you need your freedom ...

Will they ever learn?

A heartfelt write!

Love,
Margherita

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2006-06-25 03:15 PM

Way to go Sue!!

Ya know how proud I am of you!!

Hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

jody5
Senior Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 876
California, U.S.A.

3 posted 2006-06-25 04:03 PM

Your poem is an insentive for others to speak up. I loved it, as it reflects alot of growth on your part. Bless you.

Huggs Kimberly

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2006-06-25 04:13 PM

It is always nice when it is your own back
that is scratched first...with no strings
attached...

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2006-06-25 05:26 PM

no corrals and no round pens
nope
stay out in open pasture

Poetic Concept
Member

since 2006-06-25

Posts 66
God's Fingerprint

6 posted 2006-06-25 05:58 PM

I liked this, I really dont like too independent women but I like a woman who understands what they want and can talk for herself and with years alone I think u get something that a married for some 30 years will never obtain. U have a chance to gain independence so that u dont need a husband so ur husband would think twice before cheating on u, lying to u. or etc...because he knows u could move on, but a tied down for some 30 odd years type woman doesnt really have that choice it would be harder for her to move on because she hasnt actually lived, and doesnt know how to find a real man...anyways good luck...good write...elevation is the key

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passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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