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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2006-05-23 01:06 PM

That feeling
will not soon be forgotten,
nor that sound
so soothing, that it
wrapped me in
a sense of security
as calmness reigned itself
over me, and left me longing
to linger a few seconds more
there;
where, in that moment
I felt no fear.

It was comfortable
like a skin
that I could slip into
and wear, perhaps
for just a little while

as I twist and bend
trying to
stretch out time
while committing that moment
to be cherished in mind,

and become lost in its beauty,
it's magic,
in you......

hold me, forever
sweet eyes of blue.

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love. Axel Ekenstierna

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (05-23-2006 03:16 PM).]

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2006-05-23 01:09 PM

Donna...sometimes a moment is all there is...and yes, I think it can be stretched, even if it is just into a memory. Nicely done!

Nice photo!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2006-05-23 01:12 PM

Ah Donna, I know this feeling..
to have one moment last a lifetime.
Beautifully said.
Love ya lady~

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2006-05-23 01:36 PM

At least it fit with a bit of stretching.

eyes of blue are never true
eyes of green are never to be seen.
eyes of brown never stick around.

or something like that...remember that from grade school?

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

shirtless
Member

since 2006-04-29

Posts 359

4 posted 2006-05-23 01:41 PM

a sensitive piece of writing

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XOx Uriah xOX
Senior Member

since 2006-02-11

Posts 1403
Virginia

5 posted 2006-05-23 04:01 PM

Beautiful write!

Eyes within...it's back again
The moment lingers

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

6 posted 2006-05-23 04:04 PM

"hold me, forever
sweet eyes of blue"

Oh my, excellent work.

El_Campeador
Senior Member

since 2003-01-29

Posts 761
Ohio, USA

7 posted 2006-05-23 04:22 PM

Another amazing work of art from your pen...

Ben

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2006-05-23 06:37 PM

I hope you have many more of these peaceful
and tranquil moments, wrapped in love and
happiness...We all deserve that...We all do.

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

9 posted 2006-05-23 09:39 PM

"It was comfortable
like a skin
that I could slip into
and wear, perhaps
for just a little while...

and become lost in its beauty,
it's magic,
in you......

hold me, forever
sweet eyes of blue."
_________________________________

I think everyone would gladly give anything to make a moment like this last forever.
Beautiful imagery and sentiment.
I'm saving this

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2006-05-24 08:03 AM

how well you know what I feel sometimes

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