Open Poetry #38 |
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2am Return Home |
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Danielle Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 80Providence, RI, USA |
Your hand brushes my cheek It's 2am and you're just getting home You've been gone so long I almost forgot how soft your touch was I'm snuggled up under my huge comfortor Surrounded by pillows and cluching my stuffef lion, Leo It's summer and the air outside is heavy and hot The cool breeze of my AC on high keeps me from melting under my blanket As you sit at the edge of my bed next to me, your hand running up and down my back I stir My eyes open slightly and I smile Knowing your here next to me I let go of Leo and toss the extra pillows to the floor You join me under the covers Snuggle up close Kiss my lips so sweetly I smile and tell you how happy I am to have you home We wisper I love you's And as your strong arms give me a gental squeeze I drift off to sleep in your loving arms |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
NICE!! JL ![]() |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
A sweet and romantic poem...Very lovely. Patricia |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
A very sensual and feeling poem. Bravo. Huggs Kimberly |
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FiercestCalm Junior Member
since 2006-06-24
Posts 31michigan |
i have to admit, i first looked at this because we share a name : )but then i find such a lovely poem~a wonderful representation of the feeling that comes when a loved one returns.(and it fits my current mood as i wait for *my* loved one to return from his ballgame.) great poem! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very sweet |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful the poem and beautiful you, as you have no reproaches for coming home at 2am ... Leo filled the temporary void. Fantastic! Enjoyed this greatly! Love, Margherita ![]() |
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I Am Anonymous New Member
since 2006-06-26
Posts 3 |
Beautiful. |
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