Open Poetry #38 |
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Good Morning Glorious |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California ![]() |
Good Morning Glorious I am glitter, bowed and finding sweet thinking July, where morning dark is discovery. It was four a minute ago and now it’s five, a dream must have happened, for hours are not lost but they can pulse like tide and jelly fish. Words are perfume I’m wearing them now, a pillow lays with me and delicious dawn. Today is forever and the weeping is gone, though fire burns all around still the birds unbridled sing. |
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since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I hope it is, by golly! It's good to see your smile, flower girl....and to see joy in your poetry. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSis~ 'Today is forever' yes~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Today is forever and the weeping is gone, though fire burns all around still the birds unbridled sing. the entire poem was beautiful, profound, but this, Martie, this was delightful and to carry with me for the rest of the day Hugs to ya |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a beautiful July morning wake up sensation... covered in perfume of words... You DID have a good one waiting to be dreamed! ![]() Super, Sis! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah, what a beautiful way to start my day! "Today is forever"... Wonderful thought. Hugs~Nancy For it was not into my ear you whispered |
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nedj Member
since 2006-06-23
Posts 87Oregon USA |
What a thing to wake up to. Thank-you, Martie. Like the new pic, too. ![]() A poem's just a poet in a word. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lucky pillow pretty poetess with gracious pen |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
quote:I think you always wear them! I sure hope those fires get put out by the softness of this spray of words. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Oh, I love this! It is bursting with happiness and Martie-beautiful and dawn is one of my favourite times - that soft bird-song time before dawn too! And I soooooooo love: "and the weeping is gone" for the poetry, but very especially for the content. It is evening now, but I think I am going to read this first thing tomorrow morning, to enjoy waking up even more than usual. Thank you for the pleasure of reading you, Martie. - Owl |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Words are perfume I’m wearing them now, a pillow lays with me and delicious dawn. So wonderful to read you... love this~~ ![]() M and love the new picture |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Nice demonstration of the passing of moments in time. Enjoyed. Kristabell "Use your imagination not to scare yourself to death but to inspire yourself to life." |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
you write so very very well Martie - loved this - paul |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh Martie, this is just beautiful. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
You are a gift and you have a gift. You are a beautiful writer --- and, I think a beautiful person. I also loved Words are perfume I’m wearing them now, a pillow lays with me and delicious dawn. Thank you for sharing what you wear so beautifully. aziza |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This would give any morning a smile... even our hot and humid ones! *S* |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
reading this is like a hug and a smile with a bouquet and a bow |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Luscious...James |
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