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Dancing in the Dark
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Dancing in the Dark |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Dancing in the Dark I often dance within the dark The singing of a playful lark Soft metaphor upon the floor A bare foot dance of mental awe I twirl within my memory cast Those shadows of an early past That touches me a gentle breeze And blushes me with pink of tease A ghost conducts a batons will Phantoms play a misty frill And ecstasy that falls like rain Sweeps upon my whimsy brain I am a captive of a dawn Of magic dew of early morn Of spirits lacing me a shawl A moment in a dreamer’s ball Those moment’s of my ecstasies All flowers of my fantasies |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I like dancing in the dark to...  Happy Friday and thank you for a lovely morning read |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Mind if I cut in?  There must be music in the air today! Very pretty write Seymour. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good Morning, Sweet, High-Steppin' Sonneteering Man!     EA  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 One more spin around the floor Sy?What a beautiful piece to read first thing this morning. I shall dance through the day now. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Then may I have this dance.  Chris, You certainly may.  Earth Angel Love your reply. Nancy, You are a sweetheart, thank you dear. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Those shadows of an early past That touches me a gentle breeze And blushes me with pink of tease A ghost conducts a batons will Phantoms play a misty frill And ecstasy that falls like rain ~*~ Just what I needed today...a sy-song...    |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine And here is a to go with it. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
I heard music when I read this Sy!!! Well done!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio Thank you, thank you my friend. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy....Such memories you have brought me, of me dancing on my father's feet to that song when I was his little sweetpea so long ago. Thank you! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Wow! I really like this, Seymour. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie A very good memory. SmartChick Thank you sweety. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
makes me close my eyes and dream a little jig |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
What a way to start the day. Beautiful Sy. Dance on. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, That's good. Lady, Thank you my dear. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
At 4:40 a.m I find myself dancing to the rhythm of your poem and thinking how much I love the colors that color the sky at dawn and paint my slow awakenings. Is it fantasy to think how roses smile in the light and 4 o'clocks fold in the sun, but bloom all night? Klassy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Klassy Lassy Not at 4 o'clock in the morning for that is the magic time. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
I applaud you; you are a master of rhyme with meaning! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Oh, Sy, I have missed you! This is such a delightful poem and it does dance! Very much enjoyed the joy in this. *hugs*....jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
icebox From one master to another, thank you. LOL jo, And your comment is a joy to me. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: This is exquisite, dear Seymour. Nothing like dancing, even in the dark or within our fantasies, to uplift our spirits. I really believe that human beings are meant to dance, our bodies and hearts wish to express grace ... and when we succeed in this we are able to truly love life. Thank you! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita You do understand what I wrote. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I am a captive of a dawn Of magic dew of early morn Of spirits lacing me a shawl A moment in a dreamer’s ball Those moment’s of my ecstasies All flowers of my fantasies You know that I understand this all too well.... well done sir. |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Seymor Tabin, I rarely respond to your poetry because I feel you one of the best poets here at pip. I just wanted you to know You write so professionally and I always enjoy your work as do others by the numbers of replies to your posts. You are an Inspiration Huggs Kimberly |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus I know you do. My friend. jody5 My humble thanks. |
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