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The Unbecoming Silence
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The Unbecoming Silence |
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transparent_beauty New Member
since 2006-06-21
Posts 4MI, USA |
"The Unbecoming Silence" completely aware that i speak in silence my voice unheard like that of a child who, in me, lives meek and bleary and to this day i cannot pretend that i do not deplore my indisposition it is my hostility that could make the kindest of souls tangle guardedly into my web of fears it is my lack of application that trips me unmercifully into the position of failing and i cannot attempt to contend again that would only guarantee my final checkmate it is under my accountability to have never spoken a word or perhaps have said an endless amount or spinelessly have bitten my tongue my dreams i've ruined to the point of exhaustion and the bitter melody of my unsaid words remain secluded always. |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
I've been through this. One of those things that seems like it'll kill you while it's going on.....except it doesn't. Well done.  sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: ... but you do communicate well! Very good write. Love, Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is one I'm sure most of us can identify with well done  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"my voice unheard like that of a child who, in me, lives meek and bleary and to this day i cannot pretend that i do not deplore my indisposition it is my hostility" Tragic and very sad. Beautifully written, but sad. God Bless! JL  |
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