Open Poetry #38 |
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Forever Kept |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced ![]() |
Forever Kept I could never write something as beautiful as you. No picture-perfect sunset could ever do. There's no way to capture words to say I love you with all. No photographic memory could ever recall enough to display what life gave us... what time took away. |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
while time does not stand still, a photograph can capture life for an eternity a poet who cares |
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GTP Junior Member
since 2006-06-18
Posts 35NC...USA |
sometimes the memories never leave...all I know is, in time, they tend to disspiate so only the good is remembered...powerful! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Most excellent sweet Dixie gal. Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Beautiful poem! I know. Kristabell |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Beautiful, Dixie! |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
You have never written anything I have not loved. You Are Loved. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thank you each ![]() |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was such a pure hearted write... |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
"Forever kept" ... gold remains gold and your heart makes it shine even if it's hidden in the past. Nothing is lost. I love this poem, dear Dixie, it holds all your passion and love. Love and hugs. Margherita ![]() |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
memories, time and love; either way we love them all much like poetry, some days will be more of a reflection than others or that was my own thoughts in reflecting inside those thoughts, from reading your poem, upon those passing shadows, as if it was all good a poet who cares |
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rosepetals25![]()
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Very cool poem. I liked ![]() |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Memories that time will never erase ,Dixie friend we are keepers Hope |
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