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Open Poetry #38

My Soul

dreamdc
Member

since 2005-11-11

Posts 54
Utah, USA

0 posted 2006-06-21 11:41 PM

For my neice Jocelyn - My girl

You took your first breath
On that cool April morning
And with just one glance
You sent my heart soaring

My pink little blossom
From the heavens above
You were brought to my life
On the wings of a dove.

Your eyes held all the answers
So deep with wisdom and light
The truth I found within your heart
You are here to make things right.

I never though I'd meet my angel
Nor find my heart and soul
But I found it in a little girl
Who was sent to make me whole.

Danielle C.

SarBear
Member

since 2003-06-05

Posts 205
Massachusetts

1 posted 2006-06-21 11:43 PM

"You were brought to my life
On the wings of a dove."

beautiful imagery! Great write.

Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

2 posted 2006-06-22 12:17 PM

Awesome! What a blessing indeed. Nice write!!!!

jody5
Senior Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 876
California, U.S.A.

3 posted 2006-06-22 03:03 AM

It's wonderful how God brings Angels into this world to change us. You have written a beautiful poem there which she will cherish when she is older.

Huggs Kimberly

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2006-06-22 03:38 AM

they grow so fast
cherish each moment

beautiful write

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