Open Poetry #38 |
What Happened To You |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
What Happened To You Would it be the conclusion Being the end for me Writing my final chapter The last thing you see Perhaps this is the closure Ending with my tears These emotional pages Have taken nine years Having sought continuation It was what I yearned Was the ending in sight You have not returned Maybe you will never notice If I vanished from view Since it remains unclear What happened to you Hope ©2006 The link to the poem with music and graphic below http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/101/poem_8341696.html |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well I would notice, so poleeeeze don't go anywhere...ok? this was sad, poignant...and caused me great alarm... what would we do, if Hope vanished from the blue pages? wonderful write!!! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
You are so sweet Lee , thanks for your kind thoughts Hope |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Sometimes we never get the closure....so sad..... sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thank you Sky , yes you are right , their silence explains nothing Hope |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh dear, this one just aches Hope. Heart hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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