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Open Poetry #38

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howardtsu
Senior Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 678

0 posted 2006-06-21 11:28 AM

     just the thought

of getting caught

with your vanilla malt

       in my hands

could make me halt

my attempts to repair the fault in our land

    but your assault

on my senses is too much for me to stand

with your love i could vault just a little bit higher than Superman

     carrying Lois

                                               love,

                                               howard

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

1 posted 2006-06-21 06:43 PM

that could work as a love letter

Hollow heroes seperate as they run...Shadows linger in your pain dead and done

dreamdc
Member

since 2005-11-11

Posts 54
Utah, USA

2 posted 2006-06-21 11:18 PM

Very Nice. This really made me smile. I'm sure whoever she is would love to be your Lois Lane...and would probably gladly share her malt.

Smile! -Danielle

Kristabell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-29

Posts 678
Portland, OR

3 posted 2006-06-21 11:40 PM

Interesting teqnique you have. I like it. Very original. Nice write.

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