Open Poetry #38 |
Sleepless in.... |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thoughts are skimming along the outer edge of this thickness of air that tries its best to suffocate my words, those feelings necessary to summarize my days. I rely on the coolness to "satisfy my senses" and bring me to each remembrance of you. Last night I circled the moon, rode the clouds, waded in dreams that had been put aside by the randomness of passion, flirting with the changes as the dance slows and surrenders to this heat and the distance between memories. It is an escape of time, a desertion of the now, when the whispers come from the shadows and join me in that nighttime stroll allowing the evening myst to reign upon the Sleepless in Pennsylvania. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
joining you* sleepless in Florida |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
maureen, A very nice write, enjoyed the read. |
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divine chaos Senior Member
since 2006-07-09
Posts 617dancing 'neath the moon |
*sigh* so lovely ~*Sheli*~ By words the mind is winged |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maureen "It is an escape of time, a desertion of the now" a place to gather strength? |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Last night I circled the moon, rode the clouds, waded in dreams that had been put aside by the randomness of passion, flirting with the changes as the dance slows and surrenders to this heat and the distance between memories. absolute passion tremendous poem M, thank you for sharing |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I know just what you mean. |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Ah yes. Nice write. Kristabell "Use your imagination not to scare yourself to death but to inspire yourself to life." |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thanks Dixie Sy...it's an age thing I think ~*Sheli*~ thank you for reading Martie, "a place to gather strength? " yes that, too LeeJ , I try but some days the passion in life is just missing. Thanks Sue..I know you know. Kristabell, thank you for reading and responding, I appreciate it. M |
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