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Will Rhyme Member
since 2006-05-22
Posts 149 |
It's the shoulder of the road that holds me, mostly, and the watch of leaning fencepost, as I drive. But, the shoulder of my memory is what drives me and the watch of fencepost screaming "you're alive"! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Thought this was just brilliant! Liked your play on words and thoughts! misc |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
yep, you lined up those words nicely |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Yes indeed.. much enjoyed. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Will Rhyme Member
since 2006-05-22
Posts 149 |
Words are only as good as the reader's replys...thanks all! Will |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
C'est si bon... for when the shoulders soften take the curves you love the most life smiles to hold you often in observation of her post You are so clever! Thank you for the smile. Klassy |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
good insight and makes a lot of sense , we would get nowehere sitting on the fence Hope |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well done! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
It's the shoulder of the road that holds me, mostly, loved this...loved the entire body of this...wisely written and felt by all who will read... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Most enjoyable read! Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Frank W. Torres Member
since 2006-06-10
Posts 133 |
Like it. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Excellent!!! A lesson to be learned here for sure  Ruth |
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Will Rhyme Member
since 2006-05-22
Posts 149 |
You "al" make me feel like a real poet! Thanks Will |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
much enjoyed as well Hollow heroes seperate as they run...Shadows linger in your pain dead and done |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
I'm glad that you're alive and thank God for fenceposts! -Bob |
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Debo Member
since 2006-04-18
Posts 321Texas U.S.A. |
What a brillant write!!! "But, the shoulder of my memory is what drives me" Yes this is the part that hooked me I'm so glad You shared this today Thanks... Debo |
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