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Puppy Love |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
A couple of weeks ago my daughter asked me to write a couple of dog to dog poems for her to enter into a dog contest on one of the sites she visits....I had a blast doing them and thought I would share them with all of you in the hope that they bring a smile to your face....enjoy...*Her dog Sheen had just started her heat*.. Sheena, Queen of My Heart Raising my head I sense you are near As your scent reaches this cavalier My nose begins twitching with delight I emit a growl of appetite Don’t flirt with me Queen of my heart With glossy coat around me you dart By flashing eyes and wagging your tail Leaving a beckoning perfume trail I must be fed of that which I crave Waiting for you I try to be brave Before my drool saturates the ground Please don’t reject your royal hound So come dear Sheena, Queen of my heart And smile while enjoying our simple part Kirby, My Hazel-eyed King Looking deep into your flashing eyes Passion touches and electrifies I am drawn like a moth to a flame Knowing this is no romantic game Your low growl sets me all a quiver In your paws my heart I deliver I can’t resist the pull of my heart Our future course is for us to chart Breathing your scent still tickles my nose While I’m loving your commanding pose I am a wild feast set before you For to you I will always be true Dearest Kirby, my Hazel-eyed King For you alone my night howl will sing Karen Mc Neil-Tomayer [This message has been edited by Startime55 (06-20-2006 12:09 AM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 reads like a winner to me!What a delight to read you again, Karen! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was fun, creative and amusing, takes one's flesh away from the everyday schedules and mundane affairs of life, into a whitty writing, that shall we say, lifts us into the worlds of our pets... well done, enjoyed this a lot |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi Karen! So good to read you again!! These are excellent. Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wonderful !! I read this aloud to my dog Meeka, and I think that I saw her actually smile.  hugs, ChrisPoetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Karen, it is so good to be reading you again! ~ and I adore these Puppy Love poems! They were absolutely adorable! They must have tickled your daughter's fancy!  Sending a big hug-o-love 2 u Linda  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how delightful! I love these! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
These are delightful poems! What a cute Mom you are! Though I have no confidence with dogs, sometimes I cross their eyes and get a feeling of instant connection. Love, Margherita |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karen, this is a very cute write. I have no doubt that your daughter appreciated it. Hopefully others did as well. |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
These were Great Karen!!!!!!!!!!! And it is such a delight to read you again!!!!!!!!!! |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Big smiles. What dog could resist such passionate jesters as these and, really now, how many dogs actually do write poetry? Not many! Your dogs are bound to get their dates for sure. I love the word choices you've made here. I do wish that the dogs in my neighborhood would cool it a bit with the night howls though. Again, Big Smiles. Enjoyed reading. -Bob |
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