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Open Poetry #37

you click the shadows on

brother stone
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since 2006-01-25

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0 posted 2006-02-08 05:15 PM

i’m looking for the switch
the one you touch
to turn on the shadows
when you go

if i could find it
turn it off to let the light come
maybe i wouldn’t miss you
quite so much as now

it’s hard here in the shadows

[This message has been edited by brother stone (02-08-2006 05:48 PM).]

JL
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since 2004-04-01

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Texas, USA

1 posted 2006-02-08 06:15 PM

Good one!
Keep 'em coming!

JL

RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08

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uk

2 posted 2006-02-08 06:21 PM

In the shadows its always a dark place but its also the place you find yourself facing yourself the shadow of yourself always will remain

Martie

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3 posted 2006-02-08 06:27 PM

brother stone....If she is able to click the shadows on when she's gone, that must mean she can click the light on when she is there.

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

4 posted 2006-02-08 07:51 PM

Brother Stone

This likes me a lot.

Thank you.

.

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since 2006-02-07

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5 posted 2006-02-08 08:33 PM

Simple. Real. Nice.

MGROVES

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6 posted 2006-02-08 08:52 PM

very nice

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21

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7 posted 2006-02-09 03:38 AM

A good piece of writing. Enjoyed, martyjo

Bagger Vance
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since 2006-02-01

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Aotearoa

8 posted 2006-02-09 02:55 PM

aye poet
feelin this

White Gold Wielder

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Canada eh.

9 posted 2006-02-09 07:56 PM

Oh I really like this!!

Well done.
Hugs~Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

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Louisiana

10 posted 2006-02-13 12:34 PM

Yes... it is, isn't it? *S*

I like this very much! *S*

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

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11 posted 2006-02-13 12:56 PM

lovely write

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