Open Poetry #37 |
Memories of Love |
sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA |
One warm summer night, I walked through the street A tired old man, I happened to meet Brittle he was, Now moving a little slow Still sharp as tack, and asked "Do you know" My attention was drawn and I sat on the curb I listened intently as he slurred every verb. Discussing his memories and trials in his life And how he held up his sweet loving wife The story began with a pull at my heart As he spoke of their life, they were never apart As I continued to listen, to every word he had said I could feel every thought, envisioned in my head He said "my beautiful angel, we met on the walk, She bumped into me and we started to talk She was captivating, Enchanting and I knew right then My heart was on fire, As my mind began to spin The next thing I knew, we were deeply in love, Walked down the aisle, God witnessed above. From that day forward, my life was true bliss Lived each day for each other, And sealed it with a kiss Then one day a sickness took us by surprise I held on so tight, but her spirit did rise I know now as I did in the past Our love has endured, And the memories last" As he finished the words, he fell off to sleep His frail, lifeless body fell into the deep I'll never forget his words to inspire Love is a gift, With a never ending Fire Only at night you can see the depth of the sun |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Richard~ You wove a beautiful story with a heart-catching ending~ 'Love is a gift, With a never ending Fire' Yes ... indeed it is exactly that~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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poetry_queen Member
since 2006-02-02
Posts 94england, |
really enjoyed this |
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Bagger Vance Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 108Aotearoa |
aye poet drew him in you did White Gold Wielder |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
What a beautiful story. I enjoyed it very much. |
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DennisTheMenace Member
since 2005-09-04
Posts 240 |
good poem, good story |
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