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A Tumble Weeds Notes
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A Tumble Weeds Notes |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A tumble weeds Notes I’m stuck against a rock, not tall But tall enough to block and stall I need the wind to pick me up And send me on my giddy up I never know where I will fly We have this game the wind and I He pushes me along you see Along my arid destiny And I in tumble to each new Never know the coming view For in this way I grow and feed For I am but a tumble weed I never know what coup will come Nor do I count the turns in sum But dance the turning of my life No matter how the tune of fife It is a common view I know But much of life I see as so |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hi Sy, and good morning its so so much better not to know the coming view, cause then sometime, its such a nice surprise... Hugs to ya |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Enjoyed the similarities of our lives to that of a tumbleweed. We are just here for the ride. Well done. believe in what your heart feels... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Hi, Sy! This tumbles along extremely well! A pleasure to read you today!  ...jo |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy...drifting along with the tumbling tubleweed! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"I never know where I will fly We have this game the wind and I He pushes me along you see Along my arid destiny" Well, I guess "wind" is as good a name as any for whoever/whatever pushes us along because really, what's in a name? I enjoyed your flow and roll of words! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
True enough, and this one is stuck on me. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
..drifting along with the tumbling tumbleweeds. Much enjoyed today's offering Sy. Hope your birthday was a good one! Hugs~Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
But dance the turning of my life No matter how the tune of fife Sometimes... we've just got to go with the flow. *S* I like this very much, my friend... grinned at the title, remembering my first encounter with a tumbleweed and how I wanted to bring it home with me... in a car already popping its seams from being so stuffed! *S* I still have a soft spot for them... so... SMOOCH! *S* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ You are so amazing ... the gentle word-roll of this one just carried me right along~ You ROLL !  (I would have said You ROCK, but that was too easy !) *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Fantastic writing  Andrew |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
i like the way this rolls and tumbles, but no way are you a weed My spirit will rise |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Sy, you never fail to touch my heart. best to you, martyjo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Each one of your replies were a delight to read and some even more, thank you all so much. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Oh my! Excellent. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Giddy up, Sir Tumbleweed!   |
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