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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you were the follower of whispers as your feet worshiped the stones and your eyes were the amber morning waiting to bait the fathers without sons the walls were heavy with prayers voices were echoes that clung as webs and the beige that wears dark veils is still white inside to the mortar men that hurry their hands in worshiping spreading the butter of their sins to pay for some halfway house holiday on their way to a hades for the chosen was it the wine of a kiss that stirred you or the whine of a kiss that spurred me to this threadless entwining rapture where our hands are the only tools to feed the bellies of our grotesque _______________ daark |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
painfully felt and yet, knowing the vacation that you speak of, away from the rest of the world, amidst a warm hug, that says, for the moment I care... outstanding write this morning D. Thank you for the hug |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I see a huge, Georgian style cathedral in this. The only sound, some chants, and shuffling feet. I like the way it surrounds me. Thank you for this. . |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"this threadless entwining rapture where our hands are the only tools" ~ You certainly do have a titilating way of expressing yourself!  EA |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lady pipsters...thank you for your eyes..it is truely an old building...17th century...and it does have secrets moaning the hallways..thanks to you |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
 you my dark one are a wonderful penspeaker, and thankyou I very much enjoyed it Julie |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms jewelee..a pleasure to penspeak if it pleases your eyes, thanks lady |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi DS "was it the wine of a kiss that stirred you or the whine of a kiss that spurred me to this threadless entwining rapture where our hands are the only tools" wine will do that to you....er....me!  |
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[email protected] Junior Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 17Los Angeles, CA |
Sounds like one heck of a lover. Great poem, It one of those nowalater ones were you got you read it again and again. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
wine kisses, sounds delilcious darkness master to light~ no wine here i prefer light thanks for the dance of shadows in the night, while someone forgot to close a window My spirit will rise |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
An incredibly vivid poem - I absolutely loved this one Dark. What buiding is this? Would love to link your words with the "real" image and compare impressionism. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Do you know how amazing this is? I imagine so much when I read this, and I will keep those visions... =) |
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