Open Poetry #37 |
Dawn |
wanderingin Junior Member
since 2006-02-03
Posts 39 |
Dawn gives hope for a brand new day, Leading the sunlight to share its ray To the lonely flower or the blossoming tree To the sad at heart or the careless and free. It shows no bias when casting its face In a small, dark corner or the loftiest place. Its span reaches further than eye can tell From over the mountains and past the dell. Tranquil and silent moving into its role As the one who welcomes the day to toll. This dawn does not torment or demand It has one purpose, to welcome the man To this new day, he has yet to live And hope to his dreams it now can give. But if you miss the dawn today, do not sorrow For in this same manner shall it come on the morrow! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
What a lovely lilt to this entire piece~ It flows off the tongue so beautifully~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I was drawn to this for very personal reasons... my first (and for many years ONLY *G*) published poem shared your title. *S* I was 13... *sigh*... so believe me... yours is better. *S* Welcome to Passions... I look forward to reading more of your work! *S* |
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wanderingin Junior Member
since 2006-02-03
Posts 39 |
I'm sure yours was lovely!!! I'd love to read it! I can't imagine having something I wrote from back in those early years published! It must have been quite a piece! About my poem...I have missed so many dawns lately... I have to really motivate myself to get up on these dark, cold days... :/ And many times it's the only time you see the sun before it hides behind the clouds... maybe someday I'll move to Hawaii, ha, ha! |
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bgj Member
since 2005-11-09
Posts 128Ga. USA |
Well said. Good write. bgj |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
love it when people relate nature to mankinds nature...this was truly a nice smooth read. Thank you and welcome!!! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Good work. Welcome. |
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