Open Poetry #37 |
Our First Date (Thriller Version) |
howardtsu Senior Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 678 |
i'd be so surprised if a girl couldn't disguise her "Joy" for me and gave me "Almonds" to see how much she cares about ending my nightmares of being alone it's Friday the 13th and Freddie Kruger is home outside there's a "Howling" and some sounds unknown are coming from upstairs i pick up the phone he says he's already there in two seconds i'm gone but in the fresh air a "Scream" chills me to the bone where's my ice cream cone? is she alright? is she filled with fright? could i be her knight and rescue her from this "Halloween" night? Michael and Jason are keeping up with me despite the fact i'm running at top speed they're drinking Sprites while walking, i think i need my soulmate love, howard |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Cute~ I love scary movies, but not the bloody kind...LOL I like how you used the words "Almond" and "Joy"... ~ARH |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
This is a great write, but I think you need to get out moreā¦ You know, go see a movie or something. Enjoyed! JL |
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howardtsu Senior Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 678 |
you're probably right howardtsu |
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jane_kiedis Junior Member
since 2006-02-04
Posts 38Philippines |
nice stuff to read c",) i had a great time psychic spies from China tries to steal your mind's elation |
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