Open Poetry #37 |
In silent mode |
Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
In silent mode I still can know love paves a better road though the camber has a likewise tilt and the verges look the same as each and every thoroughfare laid down towards the grave. There comes a time for silent things like the yearn of love’s embrace and the wish to see new seedlings sprout above the soul level and stretch up and out still further into the feel and touch of the now perceived alive. And in the silent spaces between daylight and a dream there remains within the senses a green leaf of belief strong and healthy, vibrant, and able to survive the drought and floods and strife of my now human life. In silent mode the tiller tills and the dreamer thrills because eventually a harvest somewhere along love’s road! Helen / 6 February 2006 |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"And in the silent spaces between daylight and a dream there remains within the senses a green leaf of belief strong and healthy, vibrant, and able to survive the drought and floods and strife of my now human life." Absolutely stunning, Helen! May you have a full harvest, my friend! ...jo |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you, Jo, but let's not forget that harvests come in many disguises - I would not like to ever forget that ... while travelling. Take care! |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
and the wish to see new seedlings sprout above the soul level and stretch up and out still further into the feel and touch Beautiful lines |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thanks RedStone. When the heart writes it leads me on a journey of discovery but, of course, I've always known. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"And in the silent spaces between daylight and a dream there remains within the senses a green leaf of belief" Lovely! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
“In silent mode the tiller tills and the dreamer thrills because eventually a harvest somewhere along love’s road!” Profound beauty in this write, but especially the last verse. Enjoyed the insight you have displayed in this. JL |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
My thanks to The Lady and to you, JL, for reading and for commenting. There's so much to hear when in silent mode that I sometimes wonder why so many people ... refuse to go there. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thanks,vandana! |
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