Open Poetry #37 |
Melt |
layla Member
since 2000-11-19
Posts 74 |
What happens when we melt do we all blend into one unified color? I wanted to...dissapear in you wanted to...but you walked away Dont you know that I would've suffered all the pain that my body and brain would allow me to just to melt into you What happens when we fade? Do we all mix into one shade? When will we end this masqerade So that I could be free to-melt into you without feeling any shame Some times I think the blind are most blessed They dont see color so they seek depth See-you gotta close your eyes to see Close your eyes so u can find The strength to melt in me |
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jody5 Senior Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 876California, U.S.A. |
Nice poem. I liked the the symbolism. It reminds me of how in the bible husband and wife become 1 flesh instead of 2. Kim |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Some times I think the blind are most blessed" Thoughtful work Layla! I enjoyed it. |
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