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Sharksbean
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since 2005-09-25
Posts 368
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0 posted 2006-01-10 04:25 PM



have you ever smelled food so bad
it made you want to gag?
well i have and it's not fun
compared to bad food
a skunk smells like a sweet cinammon bun

there was one time we cleaned out our icebox
the food smelled worse than sweaty gym socks!
i had to flush the junk real quick
it was so bad it made me sick

so take my advice and glad you will be
dont let food go bad
eat it as quick as can be
you've been warned now
FLEE FLEE FOR YOUR LIVES!
I KNOW THE LAST PART DOESNT RHYME!

-may the force be with you in poetry

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poettothecars
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since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093
New Zealand
1 posted 2006-05-16 06:34 PM


I am sure at times the last piece does not need to rhyme. When the joy is always in creating the words above

a poet who cares

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