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icebox
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

0 posted 2006-02-03 11:03 AM

See the web of broken lines?
All around his head it winds,
leaving threads of many kinds
to smother him.

God walks upon his brain,
and every step’s another stain
that whispers if he goes insane
god talks to him.

©2006 by icebox

Dominique-Simone
Senior Member

since 2005-11-12

Posts 643

1 posted 2006-02-03 11:15 AM

Well done, so much said in such little words

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2006-02-03 11:17 AM

icebox

"See the web of broken lines?
All around his head it winds,
leaving threads of many kinds
to smother him."

Yes, I see that belief will help him.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2006-02-03 03:41 PM

I'm standing on the left, applauding.

...jo

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2006-02-03 05:11 PM

I'm standing with jo and I am applauding too. Good work!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2006-02-03 05:18 PM

icebox,
It surely makes you think.

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

6 posted 2006-02-03 05:26 PM

I will certainly say "it went over my head"

It seems to be someone who has an answer for everthing, who believes he is more intelligent and patronises

But it could also be someone personal who is demented - another poet writing prose

I like your writing - and some is tongue in cheek and towards the highter altitudes

Dave

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

7 posted 2006-02-04 04:38 AM

very interesting one sir

really makes ya think

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

poetry_queen
Member

since 2006-02-02

Posts 94
england,

8 posted 2006-02-04 05:32 PM

really like this alot

leanne x

wvatvrider
Member

since 2006-02-04

Posts 78
West Virginia,USA

9 posted 2006-02-05 02:16 PM

God talks to all of us-sometimes we imagine it and sometimes we know it with every fiber of our being.

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

10 posted 2006-02-05 04:32 PM

A different perspective

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