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All My Love Has Been Blind
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All My Love Has Been Blind |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
All My Love Has Been Blind By: Noah Eaton 2/2/06 More than ever I feel I know you, each time I follow through, each time you escape my field of view. You always left me with a passing glance, in your interpretive dance, and I pay my wishes, like some annuity in advance. ...hearing you breathing, breathing in the background... Finding my way to where you are, often leaving everything else behind, all time out of mind, seeing you clearly from so afar, but all my love has been blind, all your love has been blind... Peeking straight up from my balustrade, staring into deep space, tracing your special star with bobbin lace. I tear up, lovestruck, relieved that nothing has changed, cause your star glistens all the same, where I vacation every evening, to your sweet, rejuvenating embrace... ...hearing you breathing, breathing in the background... Finding my way to where you are, often leaving everything else behind, all time out of mind, seeing you clearly from so afar, but all my love has been blind, all your love has been blind... And after all this time, I’ve loved you more every day, staring through the window blind, I hope your heart doesn't feel betrayed, everytime you wake... Finding my way to where you are... . . ...often leaving everything else behind, all time out of mind, seeing you clearly from so afar... . . ...but all my love has been blind, all your love has been blind... And after all this time, I’ve loved you more every day, staring through the window blind, I hope your heart doesn't feel betrayed. And after all this time, I’ve loved you more every day, staring through the window blind, I hope your heart doesn't feel betrayed... ...everytime you wake... "If we have no peace, it is because we have forgotten that we belong to each other" Mother Teresa |
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oakgrove Junior Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 12 |
im tapping my feet to your words |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
So am I. Good work. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
great work Noah, me too love the rythme inside your lovesong. Enjoyed it very much! (((hugs)) Charisma |
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Dominique-Simone Senior Member
since 2005-11-12
Posts 643 |
It is very melodic excellent emotion in this. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"And after all this time, I’ve loved you more every day, staring through the window blind, I hope your heart doesn't feel betrayed... ...everytime you wake..." Excellent write my sidekick! Hugs~Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Noah, you are such a romantic, sweet soul.  ...jo |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
beautiful  My spirit will rise |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
So gentle and good......like the one who wrote it. Sometimes we see the scene, sometimes we see the writer....and sometimes we see both, because the writer is the scene.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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poetry_queen Member
since 2006-02-02
Posts 94england, |
hi, really liked your poem hun! thought it had great rhtyhm and style, really powerful and melodic. you can see that you have put alot of emtion into your work, and i think thats a wonderful thing to be able to do. am new to this site so i will eventually get roud to reading all your stuff. leanne x |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
So beautiful... this reads and sounds like music... sweet melody... smile... Neeraja |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
When I read this I think of me and my ex boyfriend...the story unfolding before our eyes in the past 2 years... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
She may be elusive, but she IS real, my fried! ~ and she IS coming!  Divine time can seem sooo slow! Be patient just a little bit longer!  EA  |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Noah, You have such a sweet heart and write such melodic poetry. I've thoroughly enjoyed reading your post and agree with Earth Angel. It will happen. miscellanea |
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