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poetry_queen Member
since 2006-02-02
Posts 94england, |
i feel so alone, noone to talk to. cant believe it hapenned, i thought i could trust you. feeling empty, i think my heart has broke. i should have kept shut, shouldnt have spoke. i looked a fool, but my pain was there. thought we were happy and going somewhere. i heard the whispers, the giggling and smiles. and as i joined you both there was silence a while. i ranted and raved, not knowing the story but my mind wanders off making me worry. i know you both love me, and meant no harm, and as i barged in i caused such alarm. i cried and i wept, speaking of what i knew. but the pain hurt so bad because of you two. we talked and we hugged, said things were fine. but somehow i feel different, have you took what was mine? the morning after the night before. eyes all bloodshot, do i love you anymore? the day carried on, as though nothing was said. faking the smiles but inside feeling dead. the tears kept on falling, i couldnt pretend. can we survive this? can the triangle mend. when we were alone, emotions poured out. i tried to listen, but i couldnt help shout. we talked for a while, but how should i feel? you say its a joke, but to me it seems real. how do we move forward? can we still be the same? im not sure anymore now shes in the frame. although nothing happened, i still dont feel right. i hope i can shake it ill try with all my might. you say that you love me, and i think i believe you, but let me feel what i feel you know you would do. so i sit here writing this, no feeling of warmth inside. i cant help but show it, my pain wont hide. please dont lie to me, anything but that. dont make me look a fool anything but that. i hope i can trust you please dont let me down. without that theres nothing, nothing at all. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Welcome to Passions, Leanne. I certainly do know the feelings you've penned as something similar happened in my life many years ago. Keep up the writing...it helps, it really does. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
venting - helps, that's for sure. ~hugs~  floating your way sweetieTracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
wecome to passions hope you enjoy your stay |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
This is a personal poem of the ramifications of life and the choices we make. Can we trust after being hurt? Yes is the answer..forgiveness is a quality many people on this earth do not have..a quality that could stop war and save lives..when put in this context any forgiveness below this should be easy..do you know if you will live next week?...if you do then dont forgive..if you are like 99.9% of the worlds population and dont know..then forgive...life is too short..we all may be dead sooner than we think...enjoyed your words..may i welcome you to pip.. Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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