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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
the sun went down... - oh how they cried! for welling tears they did not see the shining stars... CG |
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Bagger Vance Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 108Aotearoa |
the simplicity of your gem is potent in the feel that it delivers aye much contemplation therein indeed White Gold Wielder |
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Rainbowdust Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320Sydney, Australia |
This is gorgeous CG!! How often we make that mistake in our lives.. mourn what we believe to have lost and not realise what has come to replace it. Brilliant. The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears. |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
The sun has to die and be born again sometime but the night is beautiful enough |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
BV - thank you, if my words arouse contemplation, that is my reward Rainbowdust - Yes, sometimes we have to unshut our eyes, lest we miss a falling star...thank you. RedStoneEB - I believe the stars are there to remind us, that the sun we have lost...is not the only one out there......thank you for commenting. CG |
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Rainbowdust Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320Sydney, Australia |
Back again.. the more I read this, the more I love it, can I print it out and stick it up around my desk at work? The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears. |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Rainbowdust - please do, it would be an honor. P.S. I like your sig.... CG |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
simplistic and poetically perfect CG. Indeed, I enjoyed this very much.  |
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Rainbowdust Member
since 2002-12-05
Posts 320Sydney, Australia |
Up it goes next to my Calvin and Hobbes cartoons and Victor Hugo poems hehe. You're in exalted company. As for the sig.. I guess I use it to remind myself that sometimes a bout of sadness can produce the most beautiful poetry or lead to wondrous epiphanies that end up colouring your whole life. The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears. |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Gentle Spirit - thank you for stopping by and for your kind words. CG |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
It's good CG |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Rainbowdust - ...then it will be well placed, for I may be what you could call a 'mischievous melancholic' ...LOL. A single teardrop contains more emotion than a cache of diamonds (providing, of course, neither one is 'zirconia'...) CG |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Huan Yi - nice to see you pop in, and thank you. CG |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
CG, often we miss something very special because our tears of sadness prevent us from really seeing. A fine piece of thought-provoking poetry! Love & Star Light, EA |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Beautifully done! |
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