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Open Poetry #37

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Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

0 posted 2006-02-02 04:34 AM

                ... slab of glass infront of me ...
                        ... (us?) ...

... it is here where I can finally see you ...

           ... staring back at me ...
... motion for motion ...
   ... eye for eye ...
      ... grin for grin ...
         ... tear for ...

... turn around ...
        ... i'm already there ...
... i hear my thoughts ...
                 ... melting down the walls ...
        ... are yours the same? ...

... one entity...
   ... two lives ...
            ... one smile ...
                   ... two pains ...

... it laughs as it assumes kontrol ...
                  ... i let it hold us ...    ... (me?) ...
          ... we all smile as things begin to twist into a familiar state ...

   ... dripping from our eyesockets ...
          ... we wish it was tears ...

              ... i stare at you ...   ... me ...    ... us ...

          ... i look blankly into your dead eyes ...
                   ... it smiles ...

... two bodies ...
  ... one smile ...
   ... two lives ...
    ... one entity ...
     ... two pains ...
      ... one soul ...

We're dead.

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

1 posted 2006-02-02 04:51 AM

Its like all those little random thoughts place amongst each other and lined up in a way that its like reading a flashing memory

Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

2 posted 2006-02-02 12:44 PM

Thank you muchly!

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

3 posted 2006-02-04 02:39 AM

It's reached the point where your poetry makes me think. Well done

*HUGS* miss you

and then He created the horse...

Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

4 posted 2006-02-04 06:56 AM

I miss ya too kitten!

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