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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Drew a line the other day it wasn't straight maybe the weather crooked pencil wrinkled page the lead wept more turf to smear Drew a line on today's sunrise it went to the horizon vision stopped perspective pointed golden rays the lead cried for turf more paper to mark Drew a line tomorrows line to rest graveyard shift bodies dropped plumb straight darkened depths the lead sobbed for cover stole the light earth buried man his chartered courses on crooked creases. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Your lines often draw a sadness out of me~~ M |
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Bagger Vance Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 108Aotearoa |
and this line you drew drew me to your poetry  food for thought friend poet aye White Gold Wielder |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Excellent work. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Maureen am going through a small mourning period myself..some friendships are not meant to last Bagger thanks for clicking in, your stuff looks good too.. The Lady, glad you liked the work --> [This message has been edited by ecrivan (02-03-2006 09:10 PM).] |
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