Open Poetry #37 |
Gave The Feeling Of Affinity |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Gave The Feeling Of Affinity An affinity with the ocean I felt the soft salty spray Strolling along the beach I reached a secluded bay Into the warm rock pools I reach in with my hand While gentle waves flow Rivulets form in the sand Knelt by the water's edge The surf comes rolling in Lapping through my toes Waves caressed my skin Whilst embracing the flow I hear the whispering sea Placing a shell to my ear Gave the feeling of affinity Hope ©2006 Link to the poem with music and graphic below http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/95/poem_812456.html |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
nice and warm, I could almost feel the sand between my toes |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Great sensory! Nice write. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
beautiful My spirit will rise |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Hope Good to just read these words Dave |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Very pretty... |
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Bagger Vance Member
since 2006-02-01
Posts 108Aotearoa |
yes poetess friend your write is skin feel and elicits many a sigh to be where the wavelets and air soothe the say of soul.... honored to read you |
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