Open Poetry #37 |
Run2U (part 3) |
RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
Run2U (part 3) Care to take me to the place I was born, It’s just a train ride away- I don’t want to go on my own all the faces I used to know have changed, And we could walk hand in hand- let me tell you my childhood places now smaller than once first seen. I never knew life held so many disappointments, Your voice was the only sound drowning out- the depression that kept sinking in-between that thought of a better place to be, But I stayed for you because I felt hope- knowing your smile that held me would soon be those of arms around me. Was it just the movement of the sea, That led my voice into a scream- and you stood and listened to my pleads and then made your own to that sea, Each raindrop holds emotion I’ve felt it- each kiss holds a message I’ve passed on mine and each fairytale ends just like ours. And now I know it’s too late to look back, Thinking what part I could change if only- but I know each change ruins what we had we’ve made our own little story, So I hold onto the last words you gave me- I’ll always Run2U isn’t that what keeps me smiling still. |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Thoughts do run And they echo Words worth writing Dave |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I liked this very much (: -Juju -<>-~-<>-~-<>- |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A captivating love story! EA |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"each kiss holds a message I’ve passed on mine and each fairytale ends just like ours." Once again... nice work Lee. Very pretty and sensitive. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
There is a light, shining from within these words, a quality that is not seen enough on these pages, brilliance can be a lustre, or the calibre of the mind, enjoyed this..thank you.. Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
this made my heart smile My spirit will rise |
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